There I was! Just sitting at the kitchen table. Just minding my own business when my sister came and ruined everything by shoving an avocado into my face. She was trying to act cool because her friends were there. I looked as silly as a purple elephant. My sister and her friend started laughing. They were practicing show and tell and they were bringing in a seahorse. My bones shook. Gee, I was angry. I could’ve torn down a building. I was the angriest I had ever been before. I held my temper back and took three deep breaths.
hi aiden you did realy good on useing the set words but you could work on making the story more exiting