I was so nervous! I rode on my scooter excitedly. I had been waiting for this moment for years. I had watched my big brother go and he always seemed excited when he was going so why wouldn’t I be. I picked up a rose as I rode. It made me a bit more excited and a bit less nervous. I glanced a the transparent piece of glass on my wrist which had the time behind it. Now, I was anxious. I might be late on my first day. I really didn’t want to be. I wasn’t sure what the consequences would be there.
Great 100WC Aiden I liked how you described how you were feeling and what you were doing. Maybe you could tell us why you had been waiting for years to ride a scooter and take out some of the repetitive words.